Talk:Paora/GA1
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Nominator: Panamitsu (talk · contribs) 04:53, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 02:11, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 02:11, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Paora (hatched 9 April 2019) is a brown kiwi – What species is this? There are two species of "brown kiwi". I would also link to the species, not to the genus.
- that was the first to be born in Florida. – the first kiwi or the first brown kiwi?
- him being mistreated went 'viral'. – link "viral" to Viral phenomenon, as older people may have problems here.
- What is an "iwi leader"?
- Is there a dot missing at the end of the Zoo Miami quote, or did you deliberately leave something out there?
Assessment: Sources support the text as far as I can see. Article reads very well, no further issues. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 02:32, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Jens Lallensack Thanks for the review. I've addressed all the issues you've described although I couldn't find a source that says what species Paora is so I've kept it as "brown kiwi". I've also linked viral video instead. Do you think that it's a better link or should I change it to viral phenomenon? ―Panamitsu (talk) 04:32, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Link to "viral video" is fine. Regarding the plural: Both "kiwi" and "kiwis" are possible. You can choose, it just needs to be consistent (there is one instance of "kiwis" in the article). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 08:58, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah the "kiwis" is referring to the nickname for New Zealanders, which is always pluralised with "kiwis". ―Panamitsu (talk) 09:49, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, got it. Never mind. And congrats, promoting now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 10:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah the "kiwis" is referring to the nickname for New Zealanders, which is always pluralised with "kiwis". ―Panamitsu (talk) 09:49, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Link to "viral video" is fine. Regarding the plural: Both "kiwi" and "kiwis" are possible. You can choose, it just needs to be consistent (there is one instance of "kiwis" in the article). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 08:58, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.