Talk:Panorama Music Festival
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): ChloeGendron. Peer reviewers: Angeladav.
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[edit]Good start! I did some copyediting. Despite the work that went in to linking to all the performers, I wonder if that's appropriate? That will be difficult to keep up with in subsequent years and I think the Coachella_Valley_Music_and_Arts_Festival might provide a better model of giving info about that year and the featured/notable performers. Also, can you find additional secondary sources?
Next steps could include an:
- infobox (see Coachella)
- maybe a photo (?)
- make sure it's not a Wikipedia:Orphan
-Reagle (talk) 17:50, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
Hi Reagle (talk), I chose to link the artists in such a way based off how the Okeechobee Music & Arts Festival has their page. Both festivals are in their second year so I modeled Panorama's page after their's. More sources to come. having a bit of trouble with the infobox/photo but I'll ask for help in person ChloeGendron (talk) 15:41, 3 March 2017 (UTC)
- okay ChloeGendron, makes sense; perhaps others will weigh in at some point. -Reagle (talk) 18:19, 3 March 2017 (UTC)
I think your article looks great so far! If you could find reliable sources, I'd recommend fleshing out the Panorama 2016 section. Maybe you could include info about ticket sales/turn-out, celebrities in attendance, critical reception, etc. I think this might help with the notability issue. Angeladav (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:14, 3 March 2017 (UTC)