Talk:Pal College

This article was nominated for deletion on 30 April 2009 (UTC). The result of the discussion was keep.

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The article has made several statements that are intrinsically biased, e.g. 'The shortage of first-class educational facilities in the south-western Sydney area','Pal College is a highly academic private high school' and ' accessible, and affordable, for those who wanted the challenge of constantly striving for more and better achievement'. Other concerns include the article referring to the school in first grammatical person, rather than the standard third, e.g. 'Our pilot year 9/10 intake, which started in January of this year, has already doubled in numbers.' However, the primary concern lies in that this article seems to have become a means to advertise the subject school. Thus, the previous 5 edits have been undone to my previous edit to comply with Wikipedia's key policies.--Thepillarofknowledge 15:26, 22 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

A propose a thorough review of the article in which it should be rewritten according to the standards and suggested formats established by similar articles on New South Wales public and independent high schools (see James Ruse Agricultural High School, and The King's School articles). If after a period of 5 days (upon the date of this statement being made) where no others have attempted this review, I shall attempt it myself. --Thepillarofknowledge 23:43, 22 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]