Talk:Pain in My Heart/GA1

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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 05:00, 11 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Guitarist Johnny Jenkins, who helped Redding winning on a talent contest at the Hillview Springs Social Club fifteen times in a row and similarly successfully at "The Teenage Party", left the band to become the featured artist with The Pinetoppers. ––> Guitarist Johnny Jenkins, who helped Redding win a talent contest at the Hillview Springs Social Club 15 times in row and also at the [whatever it is] "The Teenage Party", left the band to become a featured artist with [whoever they are] the Pinetoppers.

Done. The Pinetoppers were a plain band, so I did not filled the "whoever they are".

his second single, "Shout Bamalama" (a rewrite of "Gamma Lamma"), Who originally wrote "Gamma Lamma"?

The first was "Hey Hey Baby", but studio chief Jim Stewart thought it sounded too much like Little Richard. What was the second? Also, link Little Richard.

In the 1963 session, "That's What My Heart Needs" and "Mary's Little Lamb" were recorded and cut in June 1963, the latter became one of the worst-selling singles by Redding. Semicolon after "1963".

Some content here (i.e. second half of second paragraph, most of par. 3, middle of par. 4) should be put in a new "composition" section.

I prefer the current version. In recording sections you usually also describe the composition. Also it does not look good if I split it.--GoP _T ^C _N 10:37, 18 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]