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GA Review

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 14:55, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Happy to review the article.

Review

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Lead/infobox

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  • Link numismatist; Armenian (move present link up); Romans

1 Name

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  • Link transliteration

2 Biography

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  • Unlink Turkey (common term);
  • Link Pompey if possible using someone listed in Pompey (disambiguation).
  • Link Euphrates; numismatist
  • Use c. 55 BC in the caption. (not required but it's useful)
  • the Roman triumvir Marcus Licinius Crassus is a MOS:SEAOFBLUE, I would move the links apart if possible
How about 'and a [[Roman Republic|Roman]] army, commanded by the [[First Triumvirate|triumvir]], [[Marcus Licinius Crassus]],'? Amitchell125 (talk) 14:51, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Noice, added it. --HistoryofIran (talk) 18:02, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • MOS:'S – needs to be applied throughout the article, e.g. Artavasdes's
  • Can Artavasdes be linked with one of the rulers listed in Artavasdes?
  • the lone exceptionlone is redundant

3 In literature

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  • reports that Pacorus (whom he refers – amend to 'reported that Pacorus (whom he referred' (as the author is not living)

5 Sources

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  • Link Michał Marciak
  • Bivar – the page range is not needed; link to David Bivar
Added link. Imho the page range should stay - I always use them for chapters of a book. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:58, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Err... idk. I copied it from Parthian Empire. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:59, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
...which is a 2002 edition, hence the ISBN number. I'll tweak the PE article later. I'll edit your Syme to have the OCLC, please revert if you're not happy. AM

On hold

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I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 12 January to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 19:33, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Passing

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Passing now, great stuff. Amitchell125 (talk) 18:50, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]