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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 14:55, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]Link numismatist; Armenian (move present link up); Romans
1 Name
[edit]Link transliteration
2 Biography
[edit]Unlink Turkey (common term);Link Pompey if possible using someone listed in Pompey (disambiguation).Link Euphrates; numismatistUse c. 55 BC in the caption. (not required but it's useful)the Roman triumvir Marcus Licinius Crassus is a MOS:SEAOFBLUE, I would move the links apart if possible
- How about 'and a [[Roman Republic|Roman]] army, commanded by the [[First Triumvirate|triumvir]], [[Marcus Licinius Crassus]],'? Amitchell125 (talk) 14:51, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
- Noice, added it. --HistoryofIran (talk) 18:02, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
- How about 'and a [[Roman Republic|Roman]] army, commanded by the [[First Triumvirate|triumvir]], [[Marcus Licinius Crassus]],'? Amitchell125 (talk) 14:51, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
MOS:'S – needs to be applied throughout the article, e.g. Artavasdes'sCan Artavasdes be linked with one of the rulers listed in Artavasdes?the lone exception – lone is redundant
3 In literature
[edit]reports that Pacorus (whom he refers – amend to 'reported that Pacorus (whom he referred' (as the author is not living)
5 Sources
[edit]Link Michał Marciak- Bivar – the page range is not needed; link to David Bivar
- Added link. Imho the page range should stay - I always use them for chapters of a book. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:58, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Link available for Brosius - https://archive.org/details/ThePersians/page/n3/mode/2up?view=theaterThe sources should be in alphabetical order (see Ellerbrock)Katouzian is not cited – it should be added to the Further reading section or deletedMarciak needs a location so as to be consistent with the other sourcesEnsure that your ISBN numbers are all written in a consistent wayA location is needed for RappA link is available for Syme - https://archive.org/details/romanrevolution0000syme_t1k4/page/n5/mode/2up (registration required).- Syme has an OCLC number (1035928651) but the 1939 edition is too old to have an ISBN number, so I'm unclear where it came from
- Err... idk. I copied it from Parthian Empire. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:59, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
- ...which is a 2002 edition, hence the ISBN number. I'll tweak the PE article later. I'll edit your Syme to have the OCLC, please revert if you're not happy. AM
- Err... idk. I copied it from Parthian Empire. --HistoryofIran (talk) 17:59, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
On hold
[edit]I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 12 January to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 19:33, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Passing
[edit]Passing now, great stuff. Amitchell125 (talk) 18:50, 4 January 2022 (UTC)