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Nominator: PSA (talk · contribs) 00:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Dxneo (talk · contribs) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello PSA, I'll be reviewing this article. Please consider reviewing "Truth or Dare". dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

SZA's 2017 studio album, Ctrl, was met with widespread critical acclaim upon its release. Credited with bringing her mainstream fame, Ctrl has been described by many critics as making her a prominent figure in contemporary pop and R&B music and pushing the boundaries of the R&B genre.[note 1] Even so, she grew discontented with being classified as an R&B musician, and she felt like her music was being reductively categorized into the genre because she was a Black woman.[8] — how is this relevant to the subject? dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

After the album's release, media began speculating on when her next one, SOS, would arrive. — after which album? dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I also don't understand the relation of the second paragraph to this article, but I'll spare it as it is some kind of a build up. dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

which would consist of at least seven songs that were either new music or SOS outtakes. — reads like it was written by a "fan". Can you tweak it a bit? dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

SOS debuted atop the US Billboard 200 chart, SZA's first to do so, keeping Taylor Swift's Midnights (2022) off the top and spending ten weeks at number one.[34][35] The tracking week ending January 6, 2023, marked SOS's fourth week at number one, and there was a possibility that Midnights might overtake the album for the fifth week.[36] — why is the album composition squeezed in here? I get that it's a build up, but this is diving way too into the Swift & SZA albums. Can it be trimmed a bit? dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

When she headlined Glastonbury in June 30, 2024,} ===> When she headlined Glastonbury on June 30,2024. dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see any credit or personnel. Any reason for that? dxneo (talk) 01:30, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In the infobox, I see you've listed producers and songwriters. Where did you obtain that information as I did not find it referenced anywhere in the body of the article. dxneo (talk) 01:30, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nice and short, maybe too short considering that it needs to be trimmed to stay focused on the subject. Otherwise, I enjoyed it. dxneo (talk) 01:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]