Talk:P.S. I Love You (Robin Daggers song)/GA1

GA Review

This article has successfully passed its GA nomination. --DannyS712 (talk) 02:52, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: DannyS712 (talk · contribs) 01:26, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
~~See specific issues below~~Reasonably well written
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
Only issues that Earwig's finds are quotes
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Quite broad in coverage
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
Generally adheres to NPOV
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
Fairly stable article
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
1 tagged non-free image (File:PSILoveYou.jpg) which has a fair use rationale, and 3 other images from commons.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
Passes GA

Notes

Done Can the sentence The song appeared in an episode of the same name which aired on February 4, 2013, where Sparkles hits her breaking point and changes her stage name to Robin Daggers in 1996. be rephrased?
1. New sentence: It appeared in an episode of the same name which aired on February 4, 2013. In the episode, Sparkles hits her breaking point and changes her stage name to Robin Daggers in 1996. - the second sentence doesn't need to be part of the lede, since it is only for context.
Done Can the sentence The music video for "P.S. I Love You" and the 175th episode were directed by Pamela Fryman. be clarified? Is it that the music video was for both "P.S. I Love You" and the episode, or that both the music video and the episode were directed by Fryman?
1. New sentence: The music video for "P.S. I Love You", as well as the 175th episode, was directed by Pamela Fryman. - the issue is still there, and perhaps even more so than earlier. What did Fryman direct, and what was the music for? Maybe (using active voice): "Pamela Fryman directed both the 175th episode of HIMYM and music video for "P.S. I Love You""? Or even cut the part about the 175th episode, since it doesn't add much to the article and is a bit confusing.
Done Why does P.S. I Love You (Robin Daggers song)#Release need a table for only 1 row?
Done For the 3rd and 4th images, can the captions use parallel structures? Currently: The writers were inspired by Alanis Morissette's "You Oughta Know"., and Courtney Love inspired Daggers' look in the video - were inspired by vs inspired / active vs passive voice

Discussion

I am placing this on hold pending resolution of the issues identified above --DannyS712 (talk) 01:43, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That was fast. Thank you for the review. I fixed everything you mentioned above. Damian Vo (talk) Damian Vo (talk) 02:02, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Damian Vo: thanks, but some of the issues are still there. See updated review above --DannyS712 (talk) 02:29, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done :) Damian Vo (talk) 02:50, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Damian Vo: then this passes! --DannyS712 (talk) 02:52, 10 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.