Talk:Pádraig Amond/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Going to review. MWright96 (talk) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "but never made a first-team start for the club and moved to English League Two club Accrington Stanley," - team for less mention of the word club in the same sentence. - Done
• "he enjoyed the most prolific season of his career after scoring 30 league goals in the National League, as he helped Grimsby achieve promotion" - by scoring 30 league goals in the National League, as he helped the team achieve promotion - Done

Shamrock Rovers

• "Amond joined Kildare County on a season long" - season-long - Done
• "On 8 June 2008, he scored the first goal of the 2–1 victory" - of a - Done

Sligo Rovers

• "He also played three matches and scored five goals as part of the team" - change "team" to squad for variety - Done
• "he scored Sligo's fourth goal in a 4–1 victory over St Patrick's Athletic shooting past" - a comma is needed before the word "shooting" - Done

Paços de Ferreira

• All mentions of Pacos should have the character ç in them - Done
• "he came on as a sub in the 87th minute" - substitute - Done
• "but with all of them coming from the substitutes bench it meant that the forward played just under 300 minutes in total." - better: but with all of them coming from the subsitutes' bench, it meant he played a total of just under 300 minutes. - Done

Accrington Stanley

• "he scored his first league goal for the club, an equaliser to make it a 2–2 draw at Plymouth Argyle, a 67th-minute header from a corner at close range." - a 67th-minute header from a close range header to equalise 2–2 against Plymough Argyle. - Done

Morecambe

• "a left footed volley from 15 yards out past Luke McCormick seven minutes from time to give the Shrimps their first win over Argyle in the Football League." - better: a left-footed volley from 15 yards (45 ft) out past Luke McCormick seven minutes from time to give Morecame their first Football League win over Argyle. - Done
• "home from the centre of the box Sampson's left-wing cross, which flashed past visiting keeper Tommy Lee" - striker Jack Sampson's left-wing cross, which flew past visiting keeper Tommy Lee - Done
• "Amond then dispatched the penalty to put them 2–0 up"- how about ahead?
• Wikilink Football League Trophy to 2014–15 Football League Trophy. - Done
• You don't need to wikilink Jack Sampson after the first mention of his name - Done

Grimsby Town

• "scoring the opener just on 3 minutes when Nathan Arnold chested a cross into the path of Amond" - scoring the opener three minutes when when Nathan Arnold chested a cross into Amond's path - Done
• "he scored the 3rd goal of the match on 25 minutes," - the match's third goal on 25 minutes, - Done
• "when substitute Jon-Paul Pittman played a one-two with Amond" - maybe explain what a one-two means? - Done
• "the two goals were his very first goals in any FA Cup competition." - his first goals in FA Cup competition. - Done
• "His efforts over the season earned him a place in the 2015–16 National League team of the year and saw him named Grimsby's Player of the Year" - 2015–16 National League Team of the Year and was named Grimsby's Player of the Year. - Done

Hartlepool United

• "he signed for League Two Hartlepool United" - League Two club Hartlepool United - done by Iggy the Swan
• "and manager Harrison placed a phone call to Newport manager Michael Flynn" - telephoned - Done

Personal life

• "Amond is a National Citizen Service (NCS) Ambassador for the 2016–17 season," - was a National Citizen Service ambassador for the 2016–17 season - Done

References

• Be consistent in how you write the author's names, for example references 91 and 92 have the last name and first name fields, while 93 and 96 has just the author field. - Done
• References 5, 19, 34, 37, 43, 47 and 78 are broken and all five citations need an archive link where possible - Done
• Reference 11 should mention that a subscription is required to access the full contents of the source - Done
• References 32, 41, 44, 55 and 65 are missing the author of their respective works - Done
• Reference 63 is lacking the date it was accessed - Done
• Reference 90 is missing Chesterfield from the title - Done

That was all of the issues that crept up during my read-through. On hold for the standard amount of time (seven days). MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, made a start here. Should finish the rest in the next day or so. Kosack (talk) 20:29, 25 February 2019 (UTC)

@MWright96: I think I've addressed all of the above issues. Let me know if there is anything else. Kosack (talk) 19:10, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

@Kosack: Good work. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:53, 28 February 2019 (UTC)