Talk:Outta My Head (Leona Lewis song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 17:23, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

with production done by the latter two - Hmm, care to replaced with a better word?
It is an electropop and Eurodance song, and its compositional structure noticeably different from the other songs on Echo - Something is missing here?
for a duration of three minutes and 39 seconds - consistency when dealing with numbers should be applied
- zero-nine are written out, 10 and above numerically. — AARON • ^TALK 18:16, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
UK - first occurrence, so use United Kingdom
The instrumentation of "Outta My Head" is different to the rest of the songs on Echo and does not follow the same styles of production - what actually does not follow the same style? The instrumentation or the song?
- All they other songs are low to mid tempo ballads. This song is very electro, dance and upbeat, the only one like it on the album. — AARON • ^TALK 18:39, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The lyrics of the song contain a "F**k you!" sentiment. - I am not sure about the utility of this sentence? Perhaps it needs an attribution.
up-tempo - isn't it uptempo?
The Independant - Something wrong here
- ? — AARON • ^TALK 18:39, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Micahel Cragg - Same here

Please have a look at the references. There are quite a few issues. Everything else seems fine. A music sample would be great, preferably the chorus which seemingly received much praise from critics.

On hold Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:38, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Done all. Thanks. — AARON • ^TALK 18:39, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 03:59, 24 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks. — AARON • ^TALK 10:19, 24 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]