Talk:Out of Mind (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 13:08, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Azealia911 and I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. I'll be posting my review soon. Azealia911 _talk 13:08, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Infobox and lead

• The "(EP)" is unnecessary.  Done

Background and release

• "Mark Savage of BBC News" → "Mark Savage of the BBC" we tend to just refer to it as the BBC here in the UK. Done
• Per WP:NFCC #8, any non-free content should only be used if it helps readers significantly understand the topic better. Please explain how the sound clip is vital to the articles context. Done, but I'm not really sure if I did it right.

Reception

• "alongside "Habits"" link "Habits" Done
• "Mark Savage of BBC News" → "Mark Savage of the BBC" same as above. Done

Music video

• Per WP:NFCC #8, any non-free content should only be used if it helps readers significantly understand the topic better. Please explain how the music video still is vital to the articles context. Done, but I'm not really sure if I did it right.
• "the singer" → "Lo" Done
• "recording the music video" do you record a music video? Perhaps 'filming' would be more appropriate here. Done
• "Öhman, member of" → "Öhman, a member of" Done
• The abbreviation PLS isn't mentioned in the article it's linked to. Done

Live performances

• Unlink radio station. Done
• "She performed it later" → "She later performed it" Done
• The article that Radio Xtremellä links to doesn't mention "Radio Xtremellä" once. Is it a fan name? Done

Track listing

• This section is kinda unnecessary, if there were multiple formats and versions of the release (CD single, remix EP's) then this would suffice, but there's no point in the section when there's just one single digital download. Removed

Charts

• Is there no {{singlechart}} template for the Finnish airplay chart? Done
• No need for the table to be sortable when there's only one listing. Done

Release history

• Was the song only released as a single in these three countries?  Comment: The problem with the releases is that, perhaps it is available in some countries (Belgium, Spain, Netherlands, France and Portugal) the release date mentioned in all the cited links (1 January 2013) is not correct. I don't know if I can do something with that.

References

• Several violations of WP:DASH Done, but I'm not really sure if I did it right.
• Any case of publisher=''Example'' should be changed to work=Example Done
• #21 – Link YouTube Done
• #35 – publisher=City Pages → work=City Pages Done

External links

• Switch the two links, an official video generally precedes a lyric site. Done
• Bonus points if you categorize the categories.

• I'm very sorry that this is taking so long to get to. My outside world workload has unexpectedly increased substantially, so I'm just trying to balance things out temporarily. My aim is to get to this by the start of next week. Thankyou for baring with me! Azealia911 _talk 10:54, 19 January 2016 (UTC)

• VERY sorry this took so long, take your time on addressing my comments, or get them done in an hour if you feel like it. It's up to you. Let me know when you think you've addressed everything. Azealia911 _talk 16:49, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

Passing. Azealia911 _talk 11:48, 26 January 2016 (UTC)