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Last few reviews have taken a while to get proper responses to for reasons that you can see if you look on the discussions. I will get to doing this one today, hoping there's not similar issues. --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:01, 5 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Add 2017 as the recorded year as the first section mentions how work began in July
"independently released on September 6, 2017 as her debut single." → "independently released for digital download on September 6, 2017 as her debut single."
"The lyrics of "Out Loud"," → "The lyrics of the track,"
"been described as emotive, discussing on themes" → "been described as emotive. They discuss on the themes"
"They are inspired" → "They were inspired"
"was received with mixed reviews" → "was met with mixed reviews"
"critics who argued over its quality" → "critics, who argued over the track's quality"
"was released onto Hanna's" → "was uploaded to Hanna's"
"October 18, 2017, featuring her" → "October 18, 2017. The visual features her"
Remove ref 1 from the lead as that is described in the body