Talk:Ottoman ironclad Mukaddeme-i Hayir/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:37, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs
Image appropriately licensed.
Link engine type in the infobox
- Done
Tell the reader 4 x 229 mm (what?) in the infobox
- Done
The ship saw action during the Russo-Turkish War of 1877–1878, but was laid up from 1878 to 1897, when at the start of the Greco-Turkish War the Ottoman Navy mobilized Mukaddeme-I Hayir and the rest of the ironclad fleet and found almost all of the ships to be in unusable condition. A little long, I think. Suggest breaking it in half.
- Done
single horizontal compound engine Tell the reader that it's a steam engine
- Done
222 mm (8.7 in) typo? smoothbore or rifled?
- Must be a typo in L&G, as that's what they have.
222 mm of iron plating typo?
- Same as above
outbreak of World War I in 1914 she comma after 1914
- Fixed. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 11:55, 27 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]