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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:54, 20 June 2020 (UTC)
- "both their club youth and professional level" Plurals for level. Done
- "Upon moving to North American" Done
- Lead should also mention what he did with the Pens before he got traded. Done
- There's some stats from his youth career that is available on the Pens' news article for the draft. Done
- Would it be better to use his player profile on hockeylegan.se to show his debut? Done
- "Penguins fourth line" Penguins'? Done
- "Injured reserve list" should be in lowercase. Done
- Ref 17 (TB recap) doesn't his debut, maybe find another source? Done
- This was ridiculously difficult to find.
- Shouldn't "day" in the day with the cup be lowercase? Done
- Any details on his games with Pittsburgh in 2016-17? Done
- Might want to link Penalty (ice hockey) for penalty kill. Done
- "Washington Capitals Tom Wilson" Add "player" between the team and the player name. Done
- Charging (ice hockey) would be a good link, and lowercase the only time mentioned. Done
- Use Skellefteå for consistency. Done
- If he had a large contribution for the Pens during 2015-16 season, shouldn't the 2016 Stanley Cup be added to the honors section?
- Wasn't named on the Cup bc he didn't play enough games. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:57, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 08:42, 24 June 2020 (UTC)