Talk:Orlando Norie

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'primarily in watercolor by the firm of Rudolf Ackermann'

"he painted many scenes, primarily in watercolor by the firm of Rudolf Ackermann."

This does not make sense. Currently the phrase suggests Ackerman made watercolour materials. Presumably, a section is missing that refers to Norie's relationship with the publisher, Ackerman. JF42 (talk) 10:20, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]