Talk:Organ culture
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[edit]I think you need to make it clear that the bladders were grown from the children's original cells. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.152.251.140 (talk) 17:45, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
First sentence
[edit]Currently, the first sentence in the article reads:
Organ culture is a development from tissue culture methods of research, the organ culture is able to accurately model functions of an organ in various states and conditions by the use of the actual in vitro organ itself.
This sentence seems like a run-on to me. Assuming the first sentence should end at the comma, the beginning of the next one ("the organ culture is...") still seems awkward to me. It might be lack of domain knowledge, but I just wanted to raise the potential issue.
Is the following accurate? Still quite lengthy, but at least it makes more grammatical sense I think.
Organ culture is a development from tissue culture methods of research which can accurately model functions of an organ in various states and conditions by the use of the actual in vitro organ itself.