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My goal is to promote this article to Good status. I understand this will require review and assistance from other members of the community, which is great. I invite all to examine this article carefully to make sure the content is fair and accurate. Feel free to contact me if you have any concerns. --Another Believer (Talk) 22:04, 22 January 2014 (UTC)

Update: Submitted request for copy edit by GOCE. --Another Believer (Talk) 23:46, 29 January 2014 (UTC)

Copy edit

Would you mind taking a look at this edit on more time? Having "the latter" and two variations of "the concerto" in the same sentence bothers me a bit. --Another Believer (Talk) 03:51, 5 February 2014 (UTC)

I adjusted it. See if you like my version better. – Jonesey95 (talk) 19:53, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
I do. Thank you for reviewing the article. You corrected some sloppy mistakes on my part. I did, however, move the recording credits back to the prose section. Apart from that, I agree with all of your improvements to the article. Thank you, again. --Another Believer (Talk) 20:38, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Sources

--Another Believer (Talk) 22:11, 27 January 2014 (UTC)

--Another Believer (Talk) 16:50, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

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