Talk:Operation Trio/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:57, 29 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:57, 29 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think that "joint German-Italian" reads better than "German-Italian joint" in the lede.
- Done. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Not really sure that partisan should be capitalized other than in unit titles.
- Sources overwhelmingly refer to the "Partisans" rather than the more generic "partisans". See [1] for an example from a key source. It is a proper noun with initial capital in the Yugoslav context. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
This article badly needs a map.
- Have added a fairly generic map to provide overall context, there are no good existing maps of the operational area (I'm planning to work on it when I get it ready for MILHIST ACR). Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Battalions are not normally notable in themselves so they should probably be delinked.
- These particular ones may be notable as they were the first "Shock" battalions the Partisans raised (an important innovation as they provided a mobile rather than territorially–bound force), but in the short-term I've delinked them. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Given the voluminous Yugoslav documentation on the Partisan war, they're probably notable through RS if you read Serbo-Croat. It might be worth, however, starting an article on them in general.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:03, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
This should be rephrased: During the initial conference at Opatija on 2–3 March, the NDH Chief of the General Staff Vladimir Laxa objected to an Italian proposal to involve the Bosnian and Herzegovinian Chetniks in the planned operations, and with the support of the Germans, this was agreed.
- Re-worded, hopefully clearer now. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Just a matter of punctuation, really.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:03, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Who was the German theater commander who issued the order (note 35)?
- Fixed. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Partisan Long March in the Aftermath section was linked in the lede.
- Done. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC) –––all done I think. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:01, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Good job.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:03, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much for the review! Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 05:10, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]