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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 22:42, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- "enemies
in orderto gather" - "upon the proposal to
create his owndevise "Operation Gemstone"" - "48 people were tried for various crimes
, with 48 of these pleadingwere all pleaded guilty"- Actually that first 48 was a mistake of mine; it was actually 69 charges and 48 guilty pleas. GRAPPLE X 23:51, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- "also assess
the capability ofhow the anti-Vietnam War movementof damagingcould damage the campaign" - "and Magruder; while" Replace semi-colon with comma.
- "All of these men served time in prison" If you're referring to the 48 people, change to "All 48 men served time in prison."
- " Caulfield believes" --> believed
- More information on John Ehrlichman's role in the proposed operation?
- All I could find was evidence that he was present during discussion, nothing as to what his specific role was. GRAPPLE X 00:43, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
- "A meeting concerning the project was arranged between Haldeman, John N. Mitchell—who had served as Attorney General under Nixon's first term, and directed the 1972 re-election campaign—along with Jeb Stuart Magruder and Gordon C. Strachan." I don't think along with should be used here, I suggest splitting the sentence off to something like "A meeting concerning the project was arranged between Haldeman, John N. Mitchell, Jeb Stuart Magruder and Gordon C. Strachan. Mitchell had served as Attorney General under Nixon's first term, and directed the 1972 re-election campaign."
Have addressed everything listed above. Thanks for looking this one over. GRAPPLE X 23:51, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- I've done a spot-check of the references and I'm happy with your changes. The source link of the image redirects to another page -- you'd need to fix that before I can pass the article. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 00:28, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
- Took a bit of a search; I definitely don't understand how the US archives work. That said, I found a link which points right to the image, found in the NARA's website. GRAPPLE X 02:14, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
- Great. I'll pass the article. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 05:18, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
- Took a bit of a search; I definitely don't understand how the US archives work. That said, I found a link which points right to the image, found in the NARA's website. GRAPPLE X 02:14, 31 August 2012 (UTC)