Talk:Operation Mistral 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 10:33, 30 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:33, 30 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	~~I'll do a quick c/e, but there isn't anything glaring~~ ~~Is this in Brit/Aust or US English? re-organisation or reorganization?~~
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	suggest the tables are expanded as default, not a biggie, but they aren't that big ;-) suggest × in the infobox for numbers of units in the lead, the coordination of Sana and Mistral 2 is not obvious. Could you draw the threads together for readers? ~~NATO is at best marginal in terms of universal identification, in full then abbrev I think, esp in the lead~~
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	Passing, good work