Talk:Ontario Highway 427/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MuZemike (talk · contribs) 22:51, 31 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Prose issues

...this is the only at-grade access along the length of the freeway, which thereafter divides and descends beneath Evans Avenue. → I'm not very comfortable with how this is worded. Is there a way that it could be made more concise, especially with that second part?

The collectors provide access to and from Eglinton Avenue then become Highway 27... → Seems like there is a word missing between Eglinton Avenue and then become.

MoS issues

There are so many pictures in the article, the layout is rather borked. Are there ways in which you can cut down on the amount of pictures used so that the layout is not as cumbersome (i.e. keep the most important images but cut out some of the others).

~~A few of the citations need to be written out (namely #15, #32, and #33) for consistency.~~

~~Captions need to be fixed per WP:CAPTION; captions that are not complete sentences do not get periods, while those that are complete sentences do.~~

Conclusions

Only went through roughly half the prose, but New Year's is getting in the way at the moment. Hopefully I will finish it as fast as I can. --MuZemike 22:51, 31 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

On hold – Finally finished after putting it off for a while; my apologies for not getting to it earlier. Aside from a couple of prose issues and some MoS issues (I already saw that you removed one image, and I moved another one to another section, so that is better. I'll give the standard week from today for corrections to be made, which there aren't many. --MuZemike 23:46, 8 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review :)

I've taken care of the refs and tried rewriting that sentence a bit. The captions I believe are fixed (added a period to one and removed a period from another one or two)... I don't believe that captions that read "A photo of foo" are full sentences but I could be wrong. - ʄɭoʏɗiaɲ ^τ _¢ 22:13, 9 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Passed – everything looks in order and to my expectations. Nice work! --MuZemike 03:53, 11 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]