Talk:One of the Boys (1989 TV series)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:16, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:16, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- I would expand the lead to include details from every section.
- I have expanded it slightly.
Premise and characters
[edit]- This section is well-sourced (no problems).
Production
[edit]- Reword the phrase "she do television".
- Reworded to "she enter the field".
Episodes
[edit]- This section also looks good.
Broadcast
[edit]- Great article, another section without any issues!
Critical reception
[edit]- Along with the rest, the references and prose are all in great shape!
References
[edit]- Since Newspapers.com is technically an archive website, there's no need to archive them.
- I don't think any Newspapers.com links are archived in the article, though I would have to respectfully disagree anyways because I have seen examples where the clipping url changed and it was no longer accessible without an archived url.
- All websites and authors are linked.
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- @Some Dude From North Carolina: thank you very much for the review; I have responded above. I'd be happy to address any further comments. Heartfox (talk) 06:06, 12 March 2021 (UTC)