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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Vision then reverts Abilash back to Norm." – 'revert' and 'back' are the same thing; reword.
"the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms were" → "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms was" (American English)
"it show's Vision's vulnerability" – typo?
"Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode was" → "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode were" (American English)
Remove the comma after "struggled to not make it too slow" since the sentence is quite short.
"said unlike" sounds off. Maybe add a "that" between or rephrase.
"less jokes" → "fewer jokes"
Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: all points have been addressed. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 16:25, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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