Talk:On a Night Like This/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:11, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Soon... Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:11, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

single off her → single for her
set comma after "seventh studio album"
latter two collaborators → remove "collaborators"
Musically, it is a → Musically, "On a Night Like This" is a
disco music, and is about having one-in-a-life time experiences during the night. → disco music. Its lyrical content delves on experiencing unique experiences during the night.
Some critics complimented → Some of them complimented
Commercially, it was a success → Commercially, it experienced success
Please spell "UK" out to United Kingdom
set a comma before "respectively"
Avery, with the plotline loosely inspired by the → Avery, with its plot being inspired by the
set comma after "1995 film"
Minogue has included it on majority → Minogue added it to the set list of the majority
set comma before "including her 2000"
most recently on her → most recently her
you have word repetition through "concert tour"; try to change the latter mention into "concert venue"
defining tracks, and has → defining tracks. "On a Night Like This" has
from her 2014 → for her 2014
set comma after "greatest hits album"

I have no problem with almost all of these. Does the fifth one have too much "experience"? Oh, by the way, I've jumped in on this GAR as CaliforniaDreamsFan appears busy. I'd defer to her preferences if any of these changes are contentious.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:33, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

CD1 and digital cover. → Cover artwork used to commercialize physical and digital releases of "On a Night Like This"

Other than "commercialise" (Aus Eng) this is okay.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:34, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Background and release

Image > Swedish singer Pandora (pictured) was the first musician to record the single, which led to Minogue and Vissi re-recording it. → Swedish singer Pandora (pictured) initially recorded the single for her 1999 studio album, but its rejection resulted in Minogue and Vissi re-recording it.
set comma after "comeback single"
and led to her to release → and led to her releasing
production handled by the latter two collaborators → production being handled b the latter two
set comma before and after "No Regrets"
but the writers felt it didn't gain as much success as they had hoped. → but its composers reportedly believed the result to not gain as much success as they had hoped.
They gave the song → As a result, they handed the recording
suggested that Minogue record vocals over the backing track, which she did. → suggested Minogue to record her vocals over the backing track, which she did.
on the studio album → on her studio album
feature the same backing track, → feature the same instrumental (word rep.)
had a completely different composition → had a significantly different production
from Minogue's seventh studio album Light Years, → remove "seventh studio album" here
and distributed → and was distributed
The first CD single in → The first CD single released in
second CD single → second CD
included the original recording → included the original mix of "On a Night Like This" (word rep.)
The UK and Europe CD singles → The British and European physical editions (word rep.)
in France only → only in France
including the single → including "On a Night Like This"
EMI Music Taiwan → remove "Taiwan" here
were released in the UK → United Kingdom
cassette tape, distributed in the UK and Europe → cassette tape, and was distributed in Europe (UK is part of Europe!; in order to avoid repetitions)
Europe, which included → Europe. It included
what is a "flip-side"
The single artwork → The accompanying cover sleeve
the booklet included with → the booklet from
friend of Minogue's → friend of Minogue
image portrayed a somewhat → image was of

Done. I believe "flip-side" refers to the other side of a cassette tape. For some cassingles the flip-side was blank, for others it had the same tracks as the front/first side (as appears to be the case here). I just got rid of "flip-"; this seems to work unless CDF objects.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:40, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics

elements of disco music → elements of disco music in its instrumentation
radio pod cast → radio station
and was mixed → and it was mixed
staff member at → staff member of
said that it features instrumentation of string → commented the recording's instrumentation consists of string
synthesizers, all handled by → synthesizers handled by
pre-chorus and chorus section features backing vocals. → pre-chorus and chorus sections featured background vocals
According to the sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing → According to the sheet music published by Universal Music
between B♭3 and C5 → from...to...
whilst the song → whilst the recording
Lyrically, the song → Lyrically, "On a Night Like This"
focuses on someone enjoying a one-in-a-life time experience at night time, whilst referencing factors of a relationship and love → focuses on a person enjoying unique experiences on night time, but also approaches themes of relationships and love.
he labelled the composition as a → the composition is a
and English → , and to the works of English
However, Philip Matusavage from → Philip Matusavage, writing for...,

Used "synthesisers", otherwise done.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:42, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

that it was one of her songs from her greatest hits compilation album Ultimate Kylie (2004) → that the recording was one of the singer's songs from ultimate Kylie
referred it → referred it to
favoured it → favored "On a Night Like This" (word rep.)
Why isn't Digital Spy linked?
and selected it as a highlight → and pointed it our as a highlight (word rep.)
When comparing the it to → When likening the recording to
Bextor, A reviewer → Bextor, a reviewer
United States, commending → United States, commenting,
However, the song was not void to criticism, including a review by Matt James from PopMatters, who reviewed Minogue's greatest hits album The Best of Kylie Minogue (2012). He described the song as a "bedroom-eyed nightclubber", but did say it was "still hot enough to melt large glaciers." → In a review of Minogue's greatest hits album Kylie Minogue (2012) by PopMatters' Matt james, he described "On a Night Like This" as a "bedroom-eyed nightclubber", further adding it was "still..."
Another editor from NME was Stevie Chick, whom → An editor from NME, Stevie Chick, (remove "whom")

Used "favoured" (Aus Eng), otherwise done.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:44, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

single was a success in Australia → single experienced success in Australia
It fell to number three → However, "On a Night Like This" fell to number three
number-one debuting single → a single debuting atop the chart
I now see this section includes several word repetitions and stuff like that, and I'd prefer editing it myself before passing as it's uncomfortable to list like 20 issues here.

Done the first 3. You're welcome to do those repetitions.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:45, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

The accompanying music video → An accompanying music video
You repeat "music video" two times consecutively
You repeat "loosely based" two times consecutively
You repeat "Minogue" several times consecutively
As always, I prefer editing the synopsis myself before passing this to GA
the self-titled → remove; overfluous

I've done some of these; your welcome to do more.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:46, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion

All is good besides some word repetitions with "performed, performed...", "Minogue, Minogue..." and "It, it..."
There are still minor issues on wording with this section, but it's so minimal that I'm going to fix that by myself before passing.

Go for it.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:47, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Formats and track listings

flawless

Personnel

Remove "the CD" from "the CD liner notes"

OK.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:56, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

flawless

Certifications and sales

set ref after the units sold (UK)
add a {{N/A|None}} in place for the empty space at Certification (UK)

Done; also added a ^ to Aus cert shipment number.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:58, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

External links

song page on Kylie's official web site. → page for the song on Minogue's official website

OK.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 06:58, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Outcome

I've put this On hold for 7 days in order to allow edits to this article. Best regards and good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:31, 15 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've addressed all the issues you've raised and appreciate you volunteering to catch some of those repetitious phrases.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 07:00, 19 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Shaidar cuebiyar: Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:47, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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