Talk:On Sight/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: BeatlesLedTV (talk · contribs) I'll most likely pass this but lemme do a few comments first. 15:05, 24 March 2019 (UTC) Comments below are listed by me in response to fixed issues. --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:11, 24 March 2019 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• You don't need the "Various" for songwriters since there's really not that enough to warrant it. Songs that warrant it would be "Ultralight Beam", "Fade", and Travis Scott's "Sicko Mode".
  • Removed

• I would mention the fact that "On Sight" was performed on The Yeezus Tour in the lead or, if the song was performed live over 3–4 notable times, it might warrant a live performances section. You have it in composition but it can also work in the lead.

Background

• "on June 9, 2013" → "on June 9, 2013, nine days before the album's release."[1]
  • Corrected

Composition

• This article I think could be expanded more with ref 6, which specifically discusses "On Sight". It would be beneficial to add the fact that this song has no snare drum, just like how it's important to note that Prince's "When Doves Cry" contains no bass guitar.

• I can help you expand the article with ref 6, if you feel you need help, because there's a lot of important info in here. For example, it states what the term "on sight" means and how it reflects the song. Important stuff.

• I have now expanded the article using the ref, thank you for directing me to do such an important task.

• Honestly I think we could expand more. Ref 6 has a TON of info about this song, with info regarding Rubin and Daft Punk's involvement that would benefit it. With "composition", you wanna describe the whole song (or at least most of it); like how I did for "Ultralight Beam". I can help you out a bit.

• Done

Critical reception

• Good

Controversy

• Good

Commercial performance

• Good

Live performances

• "The live debut of "On Sight" was marked by West performing it at the..." → "West first performed "On Sight" live at the..."
  • Done
• Rest of the section looks good
  • Thanks

Credits and personnel

• Good

Charts

• Good

References

• There's still many references that need to be archived. Archiving is important so that if these link ever become dead, we'll always have them and they won't have to be replaced.

Overall looks much better this time around. With some expanding from ref 6, this will be a GA in no time. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 15:19, 24 March 2019 (UTC)

Looks much better. I will ✓ Pass this. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 22:16, 24 March 2019 (UTC)