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Reviewer: Tkbrett (talk · contribs) 16:18, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


It's time for me to be a good nominator and actually review some articles. Tkbrett (✉) 16:18, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Lead

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  • Young Thug teased an appearance ...: "teased" seems a little unencylcopedic. Consider rewording.

Background

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  • The phrasing of the image caption is ambiguous, since "suggested he would appear on the song over Twitter" could imply he was going to rap via Twitter, whereas I think you mean to say he suggested over Twitter that he would appear on the song.
  • ... received a text message about a package he made ... A package? Is this jargon with which I'm not familiar?

Composition and lyrics

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  • The rapper uses his taxes paid to the Internal Revenue Service (IRS) as an excuse for the high prices of his merchandise and Yeezy sneakers, justifying them to feed his family and not have to appear on the TV series Dancing with the Stars. I don't understand what this sentence is saying after "justifying them ..." Could you please clarify?

References

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  • Ref [12] is a podcast called Kanye West News. Who runs it? I'm unclear initially on whether it is reliable.
  • My understanding is that anyone can publish a podcast. That's at least how it works on Spotify or Apple Podcast, I'm not sure if Amazon Music is different. If not, I think that would make this a self-published source. Does Amazon have a higher standard for which podcasts are hosted on their service? Have Chris Lambert and Travis Bean been published in any reliable secondary sources?
Chris Lambert used to write for Forbes and did this article on Brothers.
And Travis Bean seems to write for Forbes. Nicenice23 (talk) 18:27, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

 On hold K. Peake, comments above. Tkbrett (✉) 23:37, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tkbrett Thanks for the review, I have responded to everything above. --K. Peake 07:43, 26 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Pass Thanks Kyle Peake. Tkbrett (✉) 12:30, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]