Talk:Omar Derdour
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on February 21, 2013. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Omar Derdour was given the task of travelling to the Arab countries to raise support for the Algerian revolution? |
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 15:06, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 15:06, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]This article is brief but well written and appears to cover the main aspects of Derdour's life; there's not that much information out there on him from what I can see in a Google Books, Scholar, and News search, and this article covers it. I've done some minor copyediting as I went for proofreading and style; please feel free to revert anything you disagree with. -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:47, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
A few small points:
- What is the "Ouled Abdi" that his family belongs to? Also, should this be written in past tense ("belonged"), or are we sure they're still members?
- Reworded, Ouled Abdi is a valley in the foothills of the Aures, reworded, should be OK now. Might blue link that in the next few days.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:40, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- "Omar Derdour directed the AML Party's Federation in Constantine"-- could you include a sentence or so about the AML party's platform/beliefs? Since this was Derdour's main cause, it's worth making it clear.
- Yes, quite relevant, I've added.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:40, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- Am I correct in wikilinking AML to Friends of the Manifesto and Liberty?
- Yes, I think so.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:27, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- I marked two dead links, but don't worry about that for GA purposes. -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:47, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
- Will ask Aymatth so look into that.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:41, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass--very good little article |
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