Talk:Olivia (Olivia album)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:05, 4 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• For stylistic purposes, I'd add the extra spaces like the "Alt" parameter and the genre "R&B" so everything's even and parallel
• Also, please add spaces before "Single 1 date", "Single 2 date", "Single 3", and "Single 3 date" so again, it's also even

• I am not entirely sure what you mean by the above comments; I think I followed your comments above, but again, I didn't really understand this part.

Lead

• Great work! I can honestly say there's nothing wrong here

• Thank you

Background

Paragraph 1

• First two sentences do not have any references or in-line citations

• The first three sentences use the same reference so there's no reason to repeatedly cite the same source for the first two sentences.

• Rest is great

Composition and promotion

• Title of the audio sample should just be "Are U Capable", not "Olivia – "Are U Capable""; please change

• Done

Reception

Critical response

• I'd make this it's own section, by removing one equal sign (=) from the start and end of the heading

• Done

Commercial performance

• Again, I'd make this it's own section, by removing one equal sign (=) from the start and end of the heading (with expansion suggestions below)

• Done

• You could expand on how long it lasted on the Billboard 200, what week it debuted, what week it dropped, etc..
• Same thing applies to the "Top R&B"/"Hip-Hop Albums" chart please

• Done. I am not a huge fan of making this its own section as it is really small (the album wasn't that successful), but I made the changes if you think that they help.

Track listing

• The featured artists on tracks seven and twelve should be listed as a note, rather than in the title (look at This Is What the Truth Feels Like's "Asking 4 It" mention for a clearer example.)

• Done.

• Links should be provided to any of the writers or producers, regardless if they have been mentioned in the article before (minus Olivia since the article is about her album)

• Done.

• Once a writer or producer is mention, you only have to mention his/her last name, not both first and last names, so please change this accordingly

• Done.

Personnel

• "Olivia" should be italicized and not in quotation marks; please fix

• Done

Charts

• Remove the "Weekly charts" sub-section heading please

• Done

• Use the correct format for album peaks located here: Template:Album chart

• Can you help me with this again? I can never figure out how this works and it keeps messing up with the R&B chart.

Release history

• The "Date" and "Label" columns are flipped

• Done

• The "Date" column should be organized through date of release

• Done

Bibliography

• Add "Category:2001 albums" to this list please

• Done

End of GA Review:

Great work! Just a few comments here and there; on hold for seven days. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 16:56, 10 June 2016 (UTC)!

• @Carbrera: Thank you for your review as always. I have responded to all of your comments. I was wondering if you could help me with the charts. I keep trying the format and abbreviation for the R&B chart, but it always messes up. I was using the articles Good Girl Gone Bad and 4 (Beyonce album) as guides and they use something different when doing charts. Let me know if there is anything else. Aoba47 (talk) 19:19, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 00:47, 11 June 2016 (UTC)