Talk:Old Blockhouse/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one since I enjoyed the Cow Tower article so much...will add comments over the weekend. Zawed (talk) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments as follows:

16th century

I wonder if some context for Francis Flemming (and possibly John Killigrew and William Tyrell) is needed. Was Flemming a military engineer?

17th century

Interregnum, Royalists and Robert Blake not linked in this section. All are linked in the lead.
"Tresco became a base for Royalist privateers and Parliament became concerned that the Dutch": repeated use of "became".

18th-21st centuries

link Duchy of Cornwall, Duke of Marlborough

Other stuff

No duplicate links.
Image tags look good.
No dab links.
External links work OK.

Pretty good work. Minor quibbles only. Zawed (talk) 02:46, 30 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Zawed! I'll make the changes on Thursday night. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:11, 31 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Should be all done. I couldn't find any more on Tyrell, unfortunately. Thanks for the review! Hchc2009 (talk) 16:39, 3 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Shame about Tyrell, but I think the context is better now for Flemming and Killigrew. Looks good, so am passing as GA. A pleasure to review. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 21:56, 4 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]