Talk:Olango Island Group/GA1
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[edit]- The refs are not formatted into citation templates such as {{cite web}}.
- References go after the period, like this .[1] , not like this [1].
- "Fabulous dive sites" - highly PoV even if that is what the source says.
- Can the "Barangays" section be prosified?
- "Livelihood" seems like a slanted term for a header.
- Needs a major copy edit overall, I see several grammar errors.
I'm placing this on hold for a week. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshells•Otter chirps) 14:03, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
- The article has some major issues with PoV still ("fabulous dive sites", etc.) and prose-wise, I don't think it's quite enough for GA, so I'm failing it. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshells• Otter chirps • HELP!) 19:43, 1 August 2008 (UTC)