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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 21:48, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

If I review this, will you promise to not send highways less than a mile long to GAN again? :p (But I'm serious.) TCN7JM 21:48, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I just submitted one.:P —CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:29, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  1. When converting whole numbers less than or equal to ten, you should use {{convert/spell}}.
    Better?—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:29, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Not quite. You actually switched the only number that wasn't a whole number to the template. What I meant was to switch all the 1s, not 0.16. TCN7JM 22:37, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Fixed.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:39, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  2. The first sentence of the second paragraph in the lead isn't...a sentence. Rewrite it so that it is.
    Done.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  3. You should try to get rid of all usages of "currently". Saying "SR 365 is currently the shortest state highway in Ohio" is redundant because "is" already implies present tense.
    Done.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    You forgot the one in the lead. TCN7JM 22:37, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Never mind, I got it. TCN7JM 22:43, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  4. The history reference should go after the established year in the infobox.
    Fixed.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  5. To say that 230 cars use the route on average each day is incorrect because the source states that 230 vehicles use the route. Looking at the other columns, that's 220 cars and ten trucks.
    Fixed to say "vehicles".—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  6. Saying that "there are no reassurance markers on SR 365, except on SR 235/366" is also incorrect because SR 365 is not a part of SR 235/366. The last part of the sentence should be reworded to get rid of this confusion.
    Reworded.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Construction projects, even if the route is completely repaved, aren't generally considered notable enough to be included in history sections. This should be axed.
    Removed.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  8. I'm not sure the Logan County map works as an external link. I can't seem to identify SR 365 on it.
    Removed.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 22:25, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Well, this is all for my review. This will go on hold for now. TCN7JM 22:12, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, my concerns have been addressed. I will pass this article. TCN7JM 22:43, 4 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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