Talk:Oh Santa!/GA1

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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk • message • contribs • count • logs • email) 20:13, 29 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"Mariah Carey: Merry Christmas to You.". -> "Mariah Carey: Merry Christmas to You".
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:31, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

via iTunes in December 2010. -> via iTunes in December 17, 2010.
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

"Overall, the song has received very positive reception from music critics worldwide." I think it would be better if it was like this: " "Oh Santa!" has received positive reviews from music critics.", since all the reviews are positive and only from the US. Also, link music critics.
Done Re-worded. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Link Celine Dion.
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
For the week ending January 1, 2011 -> On the dated week of January 1, 2011
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
on the Billboard Hot 100 singles chart. -> on Billboard Hot 100
Not done I don't think that makes much sense to read. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 02:34, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

You repeated Carey/Mariah way too much! :) You should replace Mariah with Carey, and avoid the continued use of the name/surname so much. Try to replace with she or the singer when appropriate. Otherwise, this section is pretty great. I think a screenshot would be good to visually identify the most significant part of the music video. But that is your choice. :)
Done I don't know how to upload pictures on here, but I agree that a screenshot would be really good, perhaps one with Mariah on stage with the dancers and band around her. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:35, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Added. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 10:35, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Track listings

You referenced the digital download, but where is the reference for the promo cd single?
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Re-organize the main charts alphabetically. The component charts must stay after Billboard Hot 100 as it is.
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

You did an outstanding job with this article. I know how it's hard to gather all the information you can for a single that didn't gained media attention so much. Keep up with the amazing work. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 22:12, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Oh thanks for reviewing! I didn't know the article had been reviewed! Thanks, I will do the fixes now. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:27, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Done I had done some of the points without knowing they were points to address in general edits of the article! Ha. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 23:38, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I expanded the Critical reception, so if you could check that please. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 02:36, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I see that! Great expansion, by the way! :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 10:13, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks :) Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:44, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Second look through

Lead

received mixed to positive review from music critics -> received mixed to positive reviews from music critics.
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:41, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Link music critics
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:41, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

received mixed to positive review from music critics -> received mixed to positive reviews from music critics.
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:43, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Link music critics
Not done Only needs to be linked the first time, which is in the Lead. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:43, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
listed "Oh Santa!" was one of the recommended tracks on the album. This doesn't make much sense... Can you re-write it?
Done Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:43, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

It would be nice if you add some reviews of the music video. :)
*: Done Added 3. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again. Have added 3 video reviews, they are quite hard to find, especially after a year, they have become even harder. Also made the Music video into 3 sub-sections. And thanks for adding in the screenshot! Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! The article looks so much better now. Outstanding work! Passing... :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 15:58, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Wooo thanks! Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 16:01, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]