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The article serves its purpose but the state of the plot section seems to give away far too much in a bit of pedantry. I don't know anything about this film (it is actually airing on network television as I write) but I've tried to make some minor corrections to the spelling and phrasing of some things but there is still a lot that leaves me to believe that much of it could be shortened without going on into extraneous (and at times) confusing detail as it does now. 75.2.39.19 06:40, 25 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]