Talk:Octalysis

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Is it /ɒkˈtæləsɪs/ or /ˌɒktəˈlaɪsɪs/? Could someone who knows put one of those two in the lead sentence? Thanks! KDS4444^Talk 07:11, 8 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Rhymes with "analysis". ErikHaugen (talk | contribs) 17:29, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Criticisms

I have some concerns over the citations provided for criticisms-- as no actual quotes are given, and as the word "octalysis" does not appear in the titles of the works cited, I am wondering if these are actually directed at octalysis or if they are in fact directed at gamification and its frameworks. Neither exists in a form that is easily and directly accessible via a URL link, so I cannot check either. Could someone with access to these works provide some quote that specifically addresses octalysis? Thanks for that, too. KDS4444^Talk 07:19, 8 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Close paraphrasing

Some of the content is taken directly or with too-close paraphrasing from one of the references: yukaichou.com

Lots of other problems with the article, but this kind of copying may lead to its deletion. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 04:39, 13 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]