Talk:Ocean's Three and a Half/GA1

GA Review

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OK, nice overall but there's a few issues to look at first, please:

1. The infobox image is tagged as being too big, it needs downsizing.
2. In the lead: "decide to rob Carter Pewterschmidt, but Lois convinces Joe to stop. Lois gets the money from Pewterschmidt, her father," I think it would be a lot easier to read if it was clarified that Lois is Peter's wife and that Carter is Peter's father-in-law/Lois' father before stating that the menfolk intend to rob the guy.
3. "that Bonnie may give birth any day now," > "is due to give birth within days" or something to that effect.
4. How does one attempt to induce labor in a pregnant woman? It's odd and needs some clarification.
5. "He and the guys" too casual.
6. Stability isn't brilliant, and has resulted in semi-protection, apart from OR/unreliably sourced info coming in getting removed again are editors happy that the article is as it should be?
7. No production information - is none available? It is good to see a reasonably-sized reception section but no production info is a bummer.

I've checked all the internal links, just need to do the external cites now. The article's on hold. Someoneanother 17:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Response

Thanks very much for doing the review, these are valid points. I will get on addressing this soon, and note it here. Cirt (talk) 23:28, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Update: Addressed all points above except 4. 4) I will revisit this point in the episode and work on rewording this sentence shortly - alternatively if you wish to take a stab at rewording it that would be most appreciated. 6) The only concern with stability was due to IPs and new accounts that were habitually adding in either a) wholly unsourced information, or b) obvious violations of WP:NOR into the article. There have not been real conflicts over content issues aside from individuals that wish to introduce violations of WP:NOR into this article. 7) I believe I have exhausted information from secondary sources satisfying WP:RS and WP:V - haven't found production info in those sources. If you would like to help out and try to research this further, that would be most appreciated.

Thanks for your work. Everything's fine except that induced labor, and that is detailed right here if you'd like to elaborate. All external links checked. Someoneanother 01:45, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Added, per GA Review: [1]. Cirt (talk) 03:48, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks again, Ocean's Three and a Half is now a Good Article. I did have a look for production sources but came up with none, so all's well. Someoneanother 04:42, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks much to Someone another (talk · contribs) for your time and the review. Cirt (talk) 04:47, 15 April 2009 (UTC)