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Reviewer: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 16:56, 23 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality (prose is clear and concise, without exceeding quotations, or spelling and grammar errors):
    B. MoS compliance (included, but not limited to: lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists):
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources (it also includes an appropriate reference section):
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary (including direct quotations):
    C. No original research:
    D. No copyright violations:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    edit wars, multiple edits not related to the GAN process, etc. (this excludes blatant vandalism):
  6. Does it contain images (or other media) to illustrate (or support) the topic?
    A. Images (and other media) are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images (and other media) are provided where possible and are relevant, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Image
  • It needs a link for the source section
  • "Not replaceable with free media because... n.a." is not a valid rationale
  • "Respect for commercial opportunities [because] n.a." is not a valid rationale
  • Non-free album cover is missing |image has rationale=yes
Infobox
  • Latin-pop is mentioned but never cited
Lead
  • "The album debuted at number three in the Top 100 Albums chart in Spain and at the 18th Annual Latin Grammy Awards, it was nominated for Album of the Year." -> The album debuted at number three in the Top 100 Albums chart in Spain, and, at the 18th Annual Latin Grammy Awards, it was nominated for Album of the Year.
Background
  • Background -> Background and recording
  • "... buenas razones". (Works are..." -> The period after the quote is incorrect here
  • (Works are loves and not good reasons) -> Not in the citation given
  • Daniel García Diego and recorded in Madrid, Cádiz and Miami. -> Daniel García Diego, and recorded in Madrid and Cádiz, in Spain, and Miami, in the United States.
Repertoire
  • "Carmona's late father" -> "Carmona's father"
  • "with a choirs at the end" -> concordance
  • "and the caribbean" -> typo
Commercial reception
  • "debuted at number three in the Top 100 Albums chart by the Productores de Música de España" -> reword it
Singles
  • Juan Carmona, Jr -> MOS:JR
  • "The track peaked at number 26 in the Top 50 Singles chart in Spain.[10]" -> Not in the source (not even here)
  • The same for Dale Luz
References
  • 6: Link Billboard
  • 7: Unlink Billboard
  • 8: 1accessdate= is missing
  • 10: 1accessdate= is missing
  • 11: 1accessdate= is missing
  • 12: Allmusic does not go in italics
Credits and personnel
  • It is missing

Article on hold. © Tbhotch (en-2.5). 16:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaespinoza: do you need extra time to complete the remaining changes? © Tbhotch (en-2.5). 00:03, 4 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Tbhotch: Yes, maybe one day or two, I am searching for new references. Thank you. Javier Espinoza (talk) 22:36, 4 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]