Talk:Oakland Coliseum station/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:46, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
Comments
- Any reason why this article bucks the trend of bold linking all of the title in the lead?
- Done
- Wouldn't Coliseum/Oakland Airport station be an appropriate redirect?
- Done
- Where is street address (in the infobox) referenced?
- Done
- "Oakland–Alameda County Coliseum Arena" is piped to a redirect, any reason?
- Done
- I don't think you need to keep emboldening the "Coliseum" in every use, it's quite intrusive and not MOS.
- Done Unbolded a duplicate.
- "station - two mainline" should be an en-dash rather than a hyphen.
- Done
- Lots of overlinking in the three tables (e.g. Coast Starlight, UP, Fruitvale, San Leandro...)
- "side platform" is overlinked.
- Done
- "at the station:[23][19]" order refs.
- Done
- Refs:
- NO SHOUTING.
- Done
- Ensure either publication or access date (or both) are there.
- Done
- Retrieval dates need to be consistent formats.
- Done
- NO SHOUTING.
- Check all external links are RS and rep;lace spaced hyphens with spaced en-dashes.
- Done
That's all I have for now, it's in good shape. On hold while we go over these. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:23, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the review! I believe I've addressed all your concerns above. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:29, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
- Still missing some info on some refs, e.g. ref 1 has no access date. And some overlinking still there (e.g. line names on the track tables). The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 08:33, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
- I've added the access date and reducing one incidence of overlinking. Unfortunately, the line names are probably not fixable within the scope of this GA review - the links are added by the {{rail color box}} template (which in turn uses links generated by {{adjacent stations}}). But that's only three duplicate links total. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 19:01, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
- Still missing some info on some refs, e.g. ref 1 has no access date. And some overlinking still there (e.g. line names on the track tables). The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 08:33, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
Ok, this is all good now, well now. Promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 07:11, 3 April 2020 (UTC)