Talk:Nuts (soundtrack)/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 04:39, 6 January 2018 (UTC)
- Grabbing this for a review if that is okay. Aoba47 (talk) 04:39, 6 January 2018 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- For this part "following the acquiring of the movie", I would suggest "after acquiring the movie" for more concise language.
- Done
- For the second to last sentence of the lead's second paragraph, I would add a comma after "were negative" and possibly changing "and" to "but" to show the juxtaposition between the two ideas (i.e. the soundtrack's negative reception and Streisand's response.
- Done
- Background and songs
- I would recommend adding in this section the formats in which the soundtrack was released if possible.
- Done
- I was a little confused by this sentence (As production began to wrap up for Nuts in late 1987, the singer's production company, Barwood Films, acquired the rights to the film, allowing her to personally choose the music to accompany it.). If Barwood Films was not producing the film while it was actually being shot, then who was producing? Why did that company leave the project? I would recommend adding this information in a footnote to clarify this.
- Done – I tried rewording it for coherency.
- Reception
- I am not entirely sure if the Santopietro part is praise for the album. Could you possibly clarify what is meant by the quote?
- Done – I also tried rewording this.
- When reading through the Waldman source, I think that in the context the "subtle and slight" quote is actually a critique of the album as she says although beforehand. I would suggest checking the context of this quote again.
- Done
- It may be interesting to add how Waldman viewed the project as a "mini-CD soundtrack". This is up to you, and it may be too trivial to include for an article.
- Done
- Track listing
- Great work with this part; I could not find anything that required improvements.
- Thanks.
- Personnel
- It may be helpful to add the recording locations here, but it is up to you.
- References
- Everything looks good here.
- Thanks.
- Final comments
- Great work with this article. There is not much that requires improvement. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to pass this as a good article. I hope that you find this review to be helpful. Aoba47 (talk) 05:11, 6 January 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – Yes, this was very helpful. Thank you very much as always. Carbrera (talk) 20:35, 6 January 2018 (UTC).
- Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 22:02, 6 January 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – Yes, this was very helpful. Thank you very much as always. Carbrera (talk) 20:35, 6 January 2018 (UTC).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.