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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 18:43, 27 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]


  • A few duplicate links, but nothing major:
  • Peggy Carter in the first line of Development
  • Edwin Jarvis, Howard Stark and Anton Vanko in the first paragraph of Casting
  • Captain America in the second paragraph of Casting
  • Roxon Energy Corporation in Marvel Cinematic Universe tie-ins
  • Casting: "Anton Vanko was previously portrayed by Yevgeni Lazarev in Iron Man 2. Ronin plays a younger version of the character" - In order to properly link those two arguments, I'd remove the full stop in the middle and replace with a semicolon.
  • Design: "The war term "Mend and Make Do" really" - when you have a quote within a quote like this, swap the quotation marks for the interior quote and replace with apostrophes.
  • Cite #14: There's actually a Template:Cite tweet for that.