Talk:Nothing Really Matters/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:50, 25 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

on March 2, 1999, by Maverick Records → no comma here
An EDM song on which Madonna → "track" here for alternation
The lyrics are about Madonna's → Lyrically, the recording delves on the singer's
and also has → having also
declared by reviewers → link "reviewers" to music journalism
of airplay, and delay in releasing the CD single; Madonna's fans protested about the delay by Warner Bros. → of airplay and the delay in releasing ii in CD single formats, to which the singer's fans protested against Warner Bros.
number-one → number one
reached the top spot → reaching the top spot
and entered → and entering
kimono worn by Madonna → "her" here for alternation

Infobox

Alternative text for cover
Unlink "Madonna"

Background and writing

British producer's → British producers
Madonna did not want him to produce the song → use "the track" here for alternation
to Madonna, which → "to her" for alternation
she had been a fan of Orbit's → she had been a fan of Orbit's work
the demo version and started to work on it → the demo version, which he started to work on
but De Vries' said; "On all the → to which the latter confessed, "On all the
like that... It's quite slow → like that [...] It's quite slow
"Nothing Really Matters", and → no comma
Elaborating on the statement, she added: → : to ,

Recording and composition

The song featured no live → use "the track" here for alternation
It is set in the time signature of → remove "the"
even tauter..." → ... to [...]
The ambient influenced beginning → ambient-influenced
fast-pacing dance sound, with the lyrics; "Nothing really → fast-pacing dance sound, over which Madonna sings, "Nothing really
In an interview with the Wesleyan University Press, Madonna stated; "There's → "the singer" + ; to :
and stated because the single → and concluded that as the single

Release details

in six major formats; a 12 inch vinyl → six major formats—a 12 inch vinyl
and a digital download → and was made available for digital download
album version and the b-side and parent album track → album version, along with the B-side and parent album track
four vinyl's → four vinyls
that include two tracks on each → "incorporate" here for alternation
The CD maxi → The maxi CD
by the late Austrian → remove "late"

Critical reception

from Metro Weekly, all of them highlighted → remove comma and "all of them"
song as one of Madonna's career → "her" for alternation
the Billboard Staff → Jason Lipshutz
for years to come... → ... to [...]
stating "Few singles → comma after "stating"
He concluded "It's a great → comma after "concluded"
(another song of Ray of Light) → brackets to —
reviewed the single release, and awarded it → reviewed the single's release and awarded it
previous year (her song "Ray of Light" was nominated, and eventually won the Top Dance Song award). → previous year, when her song...
since 1994's Bedtime Stories, that Madonna → no comma
certified silver → certified Silver
while in the Wallonia region, the song debuted and peaked at number 43 → while in the Wallonia region it had a similar performance
The song reached a peak of number 38 → The recording peaked at number 38
In Spain, the song debuted at number one → In Spain,it was a number one
The next week it descended at → comma after next week" + "at" to "to"
present for a total of six → "being" before "present"

Music video

The music video → An accompanying music video for "Nothing Really Matters"
She later stated; "The whole → ; to ,
you're a prisoner... → ... to [...]
own moves on the video → "on" to "in"
depiction; "...there → depiction, "[...] there
her daughter at the time called → commas surrounding "at the time" → at that time
consists of Madonna → "the singer" here for alternation
"Nothing Really Matters" premiered → The visual for "Nothing Really Matters" premiered
fish painting, then shows → "and" before "then"
baby but is actually → comma before "but"
his review, stating "The → comma after "stating"
he concluded "Random? → comma before "Random?
answer.Madonna → space
commented: "[The → : to ,

Live performance

change subtopic's name to "Live performances"
ceremony, She came → syntax problems here
with William Orbit → no full names here
commented about the performance: "Her → remove "about the performance" + : to ,
InStyle Staff → InStyle staff

Legacy and other usage in media

Songs list; he stated "Copping both → Songs list, stating, "Copping both
has be cited → has been cited
Madonna took partial creative control → "The singer" here for alternation
The shows host → The show's host
the geisha look (one contestant wore a geisha look from Madonna's video "Paradise (Not for Me)") → the geisha look, including one sporting a similar look from the singer's music video "Paradise (Not for Me).

Track listings

flawless ;)

Charts

flawless ;)

Certifications

flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

30.1% is acceptable!

Links

1 problem here! Please fix!!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)
1 dead link! Please fix!!

Outcome

@IndianBio: On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:55, 30 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Done DepressedPer (talk) 09:01, 2 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Done and thank you @DepressedPer: for doing the other changes. @Cartoon network freak: I think we are good to go and as for one dab link, that is for the {{other uses of}} template and is fine since that is linking to the actual dab page. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 09:11, 2 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    - Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:41, 2 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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