Talk:Not Quite Hollywood: The Wild, Untold Story of Ozploitation!/GA1
GA Review
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Hello, I have reviewed this article per the criteria listed at WP:GA?. There is nothing obvious to prevent the promotion of this article to GA, but I'll leave you a free peer review below.
- Images - okay
- Sources - okay
- MOS - okay
- Lead:
- I don't see the statement "(often shortened to Not Quite Hollywood)" as controversial, so refs are not strictly necessary.
- The first sentence of the second paragraph is somewhat confusing with the many commas and hyphens. Better split in two.
- "which were considered vulgar and offensive by critics and film historians" can be written into active voice "which critics and film historians considered vulgar and offensive"
- It's unfortunate that the column templates in the "Interviewees" section cause a considerable gap between the intro sentence and the list (at least on my wide screen), but I guess there is nothing that can be done about it. (I'm just pointing this out in case you know a way around it.)
- Production:
- the sentence "After becoming an accomplished music video director.." has the word "become" twice
- "He was close to giving up on the project" runs a little long and has many commas, i.e. potentially confusing for the reader
- "The film also screened..." - The intro starts with "Not Quite Hollywood [...] was screened" so I am not sure if you forgot a word or if its proper English
- I personally wouldn't link to Australian Film Insitute Award for Best Documentary, as your article is currently the only article linking there.
- It is possible to add the box office winnings to the infobox
- Per [1] no undabbed items (good!)
Promoted. – sgeureka t•c 15:51, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! All the suggested changes have been made, with the exception of the box office gross in the infobox - I haven't been able to find a running total; the figures in the article are only the earnings for the first two weeks of release. Thanks again, —97198 (talk) 04:52, 12 October 2008 (UTC)