Talk:Nostrand Avenue station (IND Fulton Street Line)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:26, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "express station " what makes it "express"?
- On the New York City Subway, most lines have express trains that make fewer stops, and at express stations, like Nostrand Avenue, both express and local trains stop, as opposed to local stations, which are bypassed by express trains.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:03, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- The MTA classifies "express" stops as those served by all trains. There are theoretically stops served only by express trains, but in the NYC Subway, these run local along certain stretches. epicgenius (talk) 23:08, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks, both, but how does a reader like me know what it means from this article? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:26, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: I am not sure how we could clear this up within this article. Any thoughts?--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 13:38, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- I added a note to the station layout. epicgenius (talk) 15:00, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: I am not sure how we could clear this up within this article. Any thoughts?--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 13:38, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks, both, but how does a reader like me know what it means from this article? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:26, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- The MTA classifies "express" stops as those served by all trains. There are theoretically stops served only by express trains, but in the NYC Subway, these run local along certain stretches. epicgenius (talk) 23:08, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- On the New York City Subway, most lines have express trains that make fewer stops, and at express stations, like Nostrand Avenue, both express and local trains stop, as opposed to local stations, which are bypassed by express trains.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:03, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- " the Metropolitan Transportation Authority announced " put (MTA) there.
- "Bedford-Stuyvesant" en-dash.
- Where is ZIP code referenced?
- Link Queens.
- " the Independent Subway System (IND)" you link and abbreviate this at least three times...
- "On January 12, 1943, business, church ..." lots of run-ons here, just split.
- "Bedford-Stuyvesant" en-dash, not hyphen.
- Non-breaking spaces between numbers and a.m./p.m. etc.
- "among the 69 most" ref title is 79.
- " full or part-time" full- or part-time.
- "New York City Transit released " you mean NYCTA?
- In 1994, it was renamed New York City Transit.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:03, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- " its "Review of the A and C Lines" report. " italics for work names.
- "Street Level" Street level
- Side platform is overlinked.
- "to Exits/Entrances" why capitalised?
- Fixed all of these, epicgenius (talk) 23:08, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- "Butterscotch yellow with a medium Mustard brown " why the capitalisation?
- Queens is eventually linked I see.
- Exits table could use accessibility row/col scopes per MOS:ACCESS.
- Is "Number of exits" useful if every single one is a "1"?
- Removed. epicgenius (talk) 23:08, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
That's it for a first run. On hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 21:17, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- "one stair:" is this a USEng thing, does it really mean "stairway"? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:30, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- Done Changed to staircase to make it clearer.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 13:37, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- Tidy, all good so I'm promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:02, 6 April 2020 (UTC)