Talk:Northup Avenue Yard/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:26, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 23:08, 23 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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The article is basically ready for GA. Hold to Trainsandotherthings. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:08, 23 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

to classify cars, while, remove comma after "cars". User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
When in 1973, add comma after When

Other

Images are freely licensed or PD. They need alt text.
Earwig turns up no issues.
I'd ask for references to be archived, but IABot is currently disabled.

@Sammi Brie: I have made both the requested copy changes, and added alt text to all images. I'm not too confident in my alt text writing abilities so you have my blessing to tweak them if you wish. I didn't know IABot was disabled, what happened? Trainsandotherthings (talk) 00:23, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure. The page reads "The maintainers have disabled this interface. This is either for maintenance reasons or a security issue has been discovered." Alt text looks good; passing. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:25, 24 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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