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Suggested Move

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I suggest that this article be moved to Northrop Grumman Bat. NGC has acquired the KillerBee (now called Bat) from Swift, and is actively developing it, so I think moving the article there would be appropriate. Some sources for the recent progress (stuff that should be in the article, I'll do it when I have time unless someone else beats me to it). http://www.irconnect.com/noc/press/pages/news_releases.html?d=163974 , http://www.as.northropgrumman.com/products/batuas/index.html . -SidewinderX (talk) 19:05, 25 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I've moved the article, and I've made a couple minor changes to the page. There is still some substantial work to be done on the article, so feel free to jump in (anyone). -SidewinderX (talk) 21:57, 9 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Suggested Updates

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A number of areas were rewritten to clarify the latest configurations and uses of the Bat System. Also, the pedigree transfer was clarified between Swift to NGC. Lastly, references were provided where citations were lacking. Appreciate feedback on proposed changes. Also, appreciate clarifing where in the description "advertising" is considered present. Thank you. JCSchwarb — Preceding undated comment added 15:57, 15 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I believe there is still an issue with the neutrality of the language in this article. Some of the adjectives are slightly 'flowery'. I will try to work on this in coming weeks. Ndunruh (talk) 08:06, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]