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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:46, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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  • "entirely ... entire..." repetitive.
Reworded it as "The highway follows College Road for the duration of its route." Does the "the, the" make it too repetitive though?--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Linked it on the page.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "of I-40 from" overlinked.
Removed, thanks for pointing that out.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Length 15.1 mi[1] (24.3 km)" table says 15.3 mi.
That was an oversight of mine, apologies. It has been changed.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "centers present alongside" not sure "present" adds anything.
Yeah I agree, removed.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "NC 132 approaching Shipyard Boulevard in Wilmington." fragment, no period required.
Removed the period, thanks for pointing that out.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "70,500 cars" cars or vehicles?
Yeah it should be vehicles, the article might have said cars and I just had that in my head. I changed it.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "NC 132 and US 117 running concurrently in Kings Grant." no period.
Also removed this period.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Castle Hayne.[7][1][3]" order.
Moved [7] as the last one, so they should be good now.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "March 17th, 2003" no "th".
My apologies for that, I've removed the "th".--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the limited-access divided freeway from " WP:SEAOFBLUE and you could link freeway the first time you use it.
Linked freeway in the lead. I also consolidated the entire phrase under Limited-access road as that should provide a proper link (given most limited-access roads are freeways and are divided). Is that okay or should I just link limited access?--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's it on a first run through. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:53, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, happy with this, so promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:10, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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