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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 00:54, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Perhaps the lines "He researched the biochemical reactions that underlie the germination of all seeds and self-published a number of books that combined his scientific results. He published 150 papers in Chemistry and 20 papers in horticulture. Over the course of his career, Deno performed germination research on plant species from 150 families, 800 genera, and 2500 species." could be re-written as "He researched the biochemical reactions that underlie the germination of all seeds, performing germination research on plant species from 150 families, 800 genera, and 2500 species over the course of his career. Deno authored 150 papers in Chemistry and 20 papers in horticulture, and self-published a number of books that combined his scientific results." Note that this is just a suggestion and upto your discretion, I just think it would make more sense to club his research together and then add a line on his publications.

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  1. Comprehension:
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    (a) (prose) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (MoS) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
  3. Verifiability:
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    (a) (references) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (c) (original research) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) No copyright violation or plagiarism found. Pass Pass
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    (a) (major aspects) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (focused) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
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    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined