Talk:Nobody's Perfect (Hannah Montana song)/Archive 1
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Copyrighted lyrics
I have removed the lyrics to the song from the page since they are copyrighted. However, if anyone thinks they are really necessary and has proof that it is legal they can go back up. If they are put up again without a decent response then I shall delete them. Mouseinthehouse 18:31, 5 June 2007 (UTC)yeh well i need the lyrics im staring in a new show and i need them ! hi if you want to sing my new songs come to london on the 28th of july and you could be on my next show and we pulled a name out of the competition winner was Millie Smith 12 years old congradulations x x x they will be here later on this year
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→ "The song was written and produced by Matthew Gerrard. "Nobody's Perfect" is a synth-driven pop track that discusses the importance of overcoming mistakes." could be somethig like "Written by Matthew Gerrard and Robbie Nevil, "Nobody's Perfect" explores the importance of overcoming mistakes, while musically it is styled in synthpop. (the same as synth-driven pop and with this being said, replace those instances on the infobox and composition section; also you don't need to cover every information in the lead, in my eyes what I wrote is sufficient)
Suggestions→ This suggestion isn't really for this article as I think you're trying to make a GT out of Hannah Montana 2, so a coherent structure and uniform style is reccomended for that case. However: try to refresh your writing style and inovate it a bit. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, I'm giving you an advice as a friend and I think it could improve your writing skills even further. Instead of having always the same structure (song / album / production / music / lyrics / reception / music video / promotion), mix it up a bit to make it an engaging lead prose to attract readers into reading the article. Here's an example, for this article:
I really hope you don't take this the wrong way and realize I'm just trying to help you a bit. Not that you really need it but still...
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