Talk:No Sé Tú/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 01:40, 2 December 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Mostly copy changes and tweaks. Take a fresh look since this GAN has sat for so long and you may find things you want to change. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:08, 2 December 2023 (UTC)

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Lead

• "Manazero" presumably a typo for Manzanero
• Suggestion: Surprisingly, not even eswiki has an article on the Premios Eres. One would be immensely useful.
• Comma after "music critics".

Background and composition

• and as well two "as well as two" sounds way more idiomatic
• whom "No Sé Tú" was dedicated to try to whom "No Sé Tú" was dedicated

Luis Miguel version

• one of the two songs by Manzanero that Miguel covered in the album, along with "Te Extraño", as selected between 500 others
  • "the two" maybe "two"
  • "between" or "from among"?
• An accompanying music video for "No Sé Tú" was directed by Pedro Torres and filmed in Miami, it features Miguel and an orchestra performing in front of a building. Comma splice. The comma should either be a semicolon or a period.

Sourcing and spot checks

• 8: en esta ocasión no hay un registro exacto de a quien va dedicada la canción Yeah, that checks out. I wish this source was a bit more authoritative. Y
• 10: AllMusic listing for De la A a la Z shows the mentioned duet track. Y
• 17: I'm not quite sure what fact this correlates to in the section since this is among three references, but it at least is about this song. Good on you for wading through that really clunky El Siglo de Torreón archive! Y
• 20: AllMusic listing for Mis Boleros Favoritos shows the mentioned duet track. Y
• 28: a sit-down rendition of the beautifully written “No Se Tu” (“I Don’t Know about You”) from the 1991 “Romance” album. Y

Media

There are two media items, both fair use. The album cover has an NFCC. The sample of the Miguel cover is of appropriate length with NFCC. Encouragement: Add alt text to the album cover.

 Done Everything! Thank you again Sammie for the review! Erick (talk) 18:37, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

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