Talk:No (Shakira song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:17, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

A pop ballad, the song explores → replace "the song" with "it" to avoid repetation
is best for the two of them → is best for both
a "tender" ballad and a "classic heartbreak song" → as you paraphrase here, you need the reference these claims here as well
It also fared well → I would change "well" with "moderately", as no real big success was registered with this song

Infobox

Image needs ALT
Is the release date 2 July or 5 June?? Please create a "Release history" section where you add the correct release date with a source
Genre should be only "Pop", as others are not sourced in the article's body

Background

her first English-language album → no "-" here
having co-written almost sixty songs → numbers above ten should not be written out
first a Spanish-language album → a Spanish language album first
has always been by idol → I think you want to say "my idol" here?

Composition and recording

is best for the two of them → is best for both

Critical reception

was a "seething, acoustic-guitar-based" in → was a "seething, acoustic-guitar-based" recording in
"It's not hard to imagine → "it's not hard to imagine

Chart performance

This section should be "Commercial performance"
No flaws here ;)

Music video

The accompanying music video → An accompanying music video (don't start abruptly)
with Shakira in many of her music videos → with Shakira for various other projects
whilst it was edited by → and edited by
falls off the track and into water beneath → no "and" here
Throughout the video → replace "video" with "clip" to avoid repeating yourself
seemingly as a metaphor for finding the strength to fly on her own → Remove this. I don't see any critic saying this, and thus it is your own opinion.
does not go through with it and walks away → fails and walks away

Live performances

I will take another look on this section after you fix the heavy repetation of "performed"; use another expressions like "sang, made an appearance..."

Track listing and formats

No need for "formats" in the title
Is there a digital download out there? If no, then remove it from the infobox

Credits and personnel

from the album's booklet: → from the liner notes of Fijación Oral, Vol. 1

Charts

Flawless ;)

Release history

Don't forget to create one!

Notes

For both notes, please remove "In English translation" with "Translation in English"

References

Avoid shouting in refs 13, 19, 22, 36 and 40

Other stuff

Copy-violation

32.9% is still ok!

Media

Image seems stable

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

Little issues here and there, but overall, the article is in a good shape. On hold for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:22, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done @Cartoon network freak: Alex ^talk 23:23, 28 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Passing this! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:07, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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