Talk:No. 91 Wing RAAF/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jonas Vinther (talk · contribs) 22:14, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this one first thing tomorrow, Ian. :) Jonas Vinther (speak to me!) 22:14, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry Ian about the two-day delay - family stuff got in the way, but I'll review it now. Jonas Vinther (speak to me!) 23:25, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

• Is it well-written?

1. Lead could use some paragraphs.

2. I feel File:No. 91 Wing RAAF officers 1950 (AWM P01254.127).JPG has a waaaay to long caption. Might consider shorting it a bit.

3. The D in "development" used in reference #8 should be capitalized so as to match reference #45.

Other than these three minor points, I don't see anything wrong with it. Excellent job.

• Is it verifiable with no original research?
• Is it broad in its coverage?
• Is it neutral?
• Is it stable?
• Is it illustrated?

The article meets the GA-criteria for sure, but would like response to those three, minor points I highlighted, so I'm going to put it on hold. Jonas Vinther (speak to me!) 23:25, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

Hi Jonas, I've acted on your three suggestions -- and tks for your kind words. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 13:13, 27 October 2014 (UTC)