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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 19:39, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 19:39, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 2 needs an author.
- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:58, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 3 should be replaced with this, which isn't a SPS.
- Not quite sure what the ref has to do with the sentence it was citing though.
- Removed as doesn't cite the info. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:58, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
Saving for now. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:42, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
- Several references are missing
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.- Added where suitable Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:22, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
- "but that their opponent would struggle with.[16][8]" Reorder refs.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:09, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
- "If a player misses potting a ball on a shot," You mean pocketing a ball?
- These things are one and the same... But potting a ball is slightly more stringent in that you have to pocket the ball without fouling. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:29, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
- A bit of WP:REPCITE in the first paragraph of Breaking and the Six-ball section.
- No page numbers from Ref 4?
- There is? :24, 89–90 Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 08:09, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
That should be it. I assume some of the references were the best one you could've found online, since some are borderline SPS. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:25, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
- Nova Crystallis I've covered all of the above. Thank you for taking a look for me. :) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:22, 16 May 2020 (UTC)